IamredSpartan1234

assassins creed week1 part2

Build by IamredSpartan1234    May 27, 2018

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The-stop-sign-13

The-stop-sign-13May 29, 2018

Cool Comic!

CarilletaReach2

CarilletaReach2May 28, 2018

They found a halo spartan

JoeFilms

JoeFilmsMay 28, 2018

I agree with @TacticalSponge. Other than what he pointed out, it's great!

AiasOileus

AiasOileusMay 27, 2018

The word bubbles are much easier to read on this one, but what's with the blurry photos? Now if you had some guy knocked out, and then coming to, that would make sense for a blurry photo (for the affect). And again, I will say that you choice of angles for the pictures are great, just work on the focus, unless of course, story dictates. Say for example, a guy gets knocked out, drug onto a ship, wakes up with blurry vision (blurry photo from his viewpoint) and is confused as to his whereabouts. I hope you don't think I'm being too critical, I'm simply trying to give you some pointers on how to improve your comic. As far as camera angles, keep up the good work on those. I look forward to what is next.